It's been a while since we finished our first mini comic series collaboration, so
and I decided to start a new one XD If anyone remembers, our first one was an extension of Cerebella's ending from Skullgirls, due to how damaging we felt it was. For those of you that don't know of it, you can find it here:
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Now I'm sure people have come to realize my...dislike for the Archie Sonic comic over the past year and a half for the arc that's been going on with it and what it's been doing to the characters, so
and I decided to have a little fun and give an alternate version of it, featuring another video game franchise in a crossover event. It will pretty much cover Sally's side of what's going on, and alter a few other elements of what happened in the comic as well.
Hope you guys like it
Feel free to comment ^^
Next:
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Now I'm sure people have come to realize my...dislike for the Archie Sonic comic over the past year and a half for the arc that's been going on with it and what it's been doing to the characters, so
Hope you guys like it
Feel free to comment ^^
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how this all started?
Why shes on egg mans ship ?why she had to destroy it?
is this based on some other storys ending?
QUESTIONS!!!!
Yeah Sal...what's a little cut on your leg? You been through worse girl. ;D I'm gonna keep going on this cause so far it's pretty dang cool.
Though I must say, the swift cut to the aftermath of the explosion without seeing one did confuse me at first. Still looks good.
Yeah, it's a little rough at the start and we started working things out XD
We wanna get to the epic stuff as quickly as possible don't we all? XD
Your brain just buzzes with epicness waiting to be unleashed.
So when that time finally comes; you best be prepared to floor us. ;D
I get that feeling too with some of my future works I hope to translate to paper.
As a writer and artist who wants to tell a story you want to be told; you're gonna get that.
But if you at least made some people genuinely happy and inspired; then you did your work. ;D
I for one am reading further into this and taking note on pacing and layout for any future comics I'd like to do.
Yeah, I try to fit in humor along with the more intense stuff. My collab. partner, Waimbert, has also gotten better and better has time goes on, as far as his outlines are concerend ^^
We just released Part 10 yesterday too, and he totally outdid himself with the backgrounds for it.
Do you have a link with a collection of every comic-page?
Sally looks beautiful drawn at this comic page.
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So
I think it would be very important and very useful if you would write those words about who made exactly what in your description.
They just finished inking the next one but I have to do massive edits to it before I can start coloring it, so it's still a few days off.
If you want a sneak peak though, you can look at his scraps in his gallery atm ^^
But long story short, they think the robot is a roboticized Sally when it isn't, and before she could do anything she got warped away.
and that's what i talking about it ^^
Yeah, it should be fun creating this little story XD
and yeah
Sure it's similar, but the story at least made more sense with the aliens, and it was something you could buy, while not hurting Robotnik's character much at all. The stuff with Bunnie completely altered her character and personality (for the worse it seems) and it was all an "accident" -.-
Meanwhile we have magic, from a wizard, wielding a magical artifact. Sure our first argument was on the power of the chaos emeralds, but I feel the narrative logic of the use of various plot devices warrants a deeper discussion here. Basically, Bunnie was static where she was. There was no character development going for her, and that's not really good for a major character in an on-going series. So they do something that hasn't been done: remove her cybernetics. It was something that was never touched upon in the BEM storyline (why didn't Bunnie react to everyone else losing their roboticized forms and she did not?) but gives it a twist. While she originally fought to be normal again, she eventually accepted herself for who she is, then its taken away from her. What happens then? That's what we're seeing now.
Was the motive weak? No
Was the delivery for the story weak? I don't think so.
Think about it. Not only does it strip Bunnie of her abilities, thus giving her a new crisis to go through (something a protagonist in a story needs, lest they be shoved aside as an inconsequential character), but it also shows that Naugus is not in control of his powers. We only learned just that issue or the issue previous that Naugus has three other wizards swimming around in his head. Curing Bunnie was another sign that something was going terribly wrong with him before things started to really hit the fan in "Secret Freedom."
Are you kidding me? Bunnie was given zero character development after getting "deroboticized". She was turned normal, acted gloomy, acted like a fool, and then ran off to become Robotnik's slave through her Uncle. The pacing for her arc is horrible in this and gives her little to no respect. Bunnie KNOWS her Uncle works for Robotnik, she KNOWS joining his group means working under Robotnik, even if she doesn't plan to betray her friends and only wants her robotic parts back, she is STILL choosing to work under Robotnik's control and pray that he never comes to realize this, just to get her robotic limbs back. This is horrible and rushed motivation with bad delivery.
Plus a new crisis is fine, but to essentially say "this person is absolutely nothing without her mechanical parts and is willing to sell her soul to Robotnik to get them back" is a rather horrible idea to come up with. I mean we're literally getting into Spiderman "One More Day" territory here.
Oh, and doesn't the crisis of "Robotnik wants to kill us all and we have to stay alive while trying to defeat him and and all other enemies" count? I mean come on, it's not like they're sitting at home with nothing to do. Every day is a new battlefield to fight in, I don't buy that you have to mutilate or put a character through hell on a regular basis, just to keep them relevant to the plot. Just because Marvel/DC kills off or reboots their characters regularly, it does not in any way mean that is how things should be done, and instead cheapens the characters and makes them feel like mere plot devices to be tossed around however the writer wants.